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Simon R. Gladdish January 13, 2013 at 1:03 pm

Dear Katy

Shouldn’t ‘reflect’ be ‘reflects’ in the third stanza? Sweet poem. Is it one of yours?

Best wishes from Simon

Ms Baroque January 13, 2013 at 1:21 pm

Simon it’s an inspirational image with a pink unicorn. It’s the feelings that matter, not the verb declension. And yes, it’s very sweet, isn’t it? Unfortunately it didn’t succeed in making my brother throw up. It may have too much reality in it, and also he’s a nurse; he can take anything.

Dennis Tomlinson January 13, 2013 at 9:28 pm

I thought it must have come from a greetings card.

Ms Baroque January 14, 2013 at 9:49 am

Dennis, THANK you! And I realised only last night that of course what it needed was a bad apostrophe. I was just too tired when I did it to think of putting on in. Next time…

Opera Chav January 14, 2013 at 10:09 pm

My little bony pony
The typo pinkness obscure to read
Like Manet in his latent garden
Demure
But to be a loved brother is a wonderful thing
No comma fetish can mask its bling

Opera Chav

Rachel Fox January 15, 2013 at 8:21 am

You must send it to inspirationalpoet.com
They’re sight is under construktion.
x

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